Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Investment Workshops Could You Please Check If There Is Any Grammatical Error In This Sentence?

Could you please check if there is any grammatical error in this sentence? - investment workshops

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Tomorrow sees the start ABC Local Governance Report. This report is the result of a survey conducted in 200 regencies to assess the investment climate. The report shows the regions with more favorable investment climate and the worst. Andy will be at this event. Tina and Jennifer is currently attending the workshop in CA.

2 comments:

hickcraz... said...

I have suggestions in the text of the paragraph.

Tomorrow, NBC will start its report on local governance. This report contains the results of a recent survey on the investment climate in 200 districts. The report of the study shows that regions with the best and worst investment climate. Andy spoke at this event. Tina and Jennifer are now at a workshop in CA.

hickcraz... said...

I have suggestions in the text of the paragraph.

Tomorrow, NBC will start its report on local governance. This report contains the results of a recent survey on the investment climate in 200 districts. The report of the study shows that regions with the best and worst investment climate. Andy spoke at this event. Tina and Jennifer are now at a workshop in CA.

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